Once upon a time there was a young boy called Santiago who, as he would say as a teenager, was "flat" with his studies, getting up early ,and, in general,with the duties of his school work and minimal tasks that his parents demanded him to do at home . Later, this young man entered the University, but it was never clear if he wanted to study Law, Veterinary, Industrial Engineering or another career. During all his years as a young university student he was very responsible. He took his career and, before entering the world of work, he decided to have a year out. So, one day , he told his parents about his decision to leave the house and went to the south of Chile, to a quiet and remote area of the island of Chiloe, where he could stay far from the city of Castro and where the environment had very few houses each one far away from each other ,more than ten blocks away .
In this short story, we have a lots of types of sentences, for example, simple, complex and others. Which obviously gives you a sense of the story and makes it more fun.
Benjamin, is very interesting the way you have used the different type of sentences, they gives an effect of cohesion to the narrative text and it is more entertaining
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